There's WAY too much going on for a 350 page book.
I don't understand Charlie's feigned reluctance to accept Reyes's proposal. Was there ever any doubt what her answer would be? I could have easily done without that plot line.
Why the hell won't anyone give Charlie a straight answer? I'm sick of her fumbling around with her abilities and only learning something new when she's placed in a life or death situation.
Did the book ever explain why Jessica was mistaken for Charlie's friend and taken to the silo?
Given how she set up the ending, I'm a little apprehensive about where Jones is headed with the next book.
The humor saved this book for me, it might be a little cheesy at times but I love it.