The story was great, but the details kept making me cringe. In the real world studded chokers, jeans that lace up the sides, and six inch tall Mary-Janes, would not equate to every man Riley comes in contact with professing their lust for her. I just couldn't get past it. Plus, the author drops the names of awful bands like Linkin Park and Chevelle. I hate to get caught up in the details but God it's just so awfully tacky. I really did like the story but hopefully Riley will grow up a bit in the next story.